Assignment 1 part 1
Post an image of your completed Who am I?
Assignment 1 part 2
Post three of your pictures that represent the direction you want to go and what you want to shoot. If you do not have three images, post three images that other people took to represent the direction you want to go and what you want to shoot.
Feedback from Jay P
Direction is strong and you are mixing at play and in the studio. Great images. The at play needs to be stronger. Keep shooting in this area.
Assignment 1 part 3
Post one new image from your photo shoot that looks like or is better than the three images you submitted.
Feedback from Jay P
You can light and it fits so well with your other images. Your spot on.
Assignment 2
Submit your new or updated website’s URL
Feedback from Adelaide
I would say on the Angebot sections there is too much text. But because of the German culture, this is perfect. They actually read everything. It’s very clear what they get, and the person can book with you. Add a picture to the “Buchungsanfrage.” Keep the excitement going. Your portfolio matches your buyer personas very well. Yeah, good suggestion regarding the “buchungsanfrage”, thank you! Lol, and I thought it might not evne be enought text.In your bio, you need to get to the point of who you are and what you do. I think you need to rework the paragraph that starts with “Als Sportfotograf durfte” between your first sentence and second paragraph. In the bio, you let them email you. Do you have another way they can stay in touch with you without saying anything? Like a newsletter, Facebook, twitter, some other german site? I see you’re in Zürich! Cool. On the studio page, you might want to also add the address. Get a picture on that contact page.Yes, I could add my facebook link there and I really can get more to the point in the part of the bio you pointed out, good suggestions! Your website is AWESOME. Way to go!! Oh, you could break your portfolio into three sections as well. My only thought is that athletes seem more like end consumers and need more information, but this website is an industry pro website. Like, for editorial work. You definitely added more information in the Angebot. I’m going to have Hector take a look to see if he would recommend you add something to your homepage. Look at the class for websites. Check out the part about websites for everyone else. Also, on the checklist, look at the checklist items for that type of website. I think that would be the way to go for what you are doing. You could move people through the sales funnel more easily.
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